What if . . . ?

Question Everything

Question Everything

What if . . . ?

That’s a simple question and a daunting exercise. It’s the launching point for grand ideas from master storytellers including Ray Bradbury and Stephen King.

It also launched my commitment and surrender to my calling to write.

Great storytellers of all ages have worked this way. They’ve thought of a setting, a circumstance or a character and then asked themselves “what if?” And then they’ve asked it over and over and over again, dismissing the overdone, the trite, and the obvious—until something clicks.

We all have a Mt. Everest when trying to tell stories whether based in real life or conjured from our subconscious mind.

Mine is that I’m not creative enough to have an original idea. A fresh concept. A twist that hasn’t been done before.

I just finished Zen in the Art of Writing by Bradbury. Asking this seemingly simple question opened up a world of memories to him and fed decades of amazing stories enjoyed by millions.

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Ray Bradbury

On King’s FAQ page on his website, he answers the age-old question: Where do you get your ideas?

I get my ideas from everywhere. But what all of my ideas boil down to is seeing maybe one thing, but in a lot of cases it’s seeing two things and having them come together in some new and interesting way, and then adding the question ‘What if?’ ‘What if’ is always the key question.

Books I love and transformative events in my life have their origins in this simple question.

A few years ago, I wrote the following in my morning pages: What if I woke up earlier each day and tried my hardest? What if I woke up each day and tried as hard as I could to write?

When I asked the question, energy flowed, answers arrived, and I’ve been writing ever since.

I decided to take a break from revising my novel over the holidays and pledged to refill my creative well. I also committed to an online course in storytelling and have been receiving daily writing prompts in my email inbox.

With 10 days off from my day-job, I recommitted to morning pages.

Before I get out of bed, I reach for my rumpled pink journal (2.99 on clearance at TJ Maxx – they have ultra-cool journals sometimes) and blue flair pen, check for the prompt in my email via my smartphone and get the ink inching across the page.

Because I’m almost fully reclined and it’s often dark, my writing resembles seismograph etchings, but somehow, I can read it just fine.

None of these vignettes or scenes are complete, though many of them hint at a good idea lurking in the scriggles. My inner critic shouts at me that these beginnings lack originality, that they’re dull.

What if I tell my inner critic to pipe down? What if I mention my doubts to a writing friend who suggests I apply the “what if” technique from two storytelling legends? What if I commit to asking this of the story starts in my morning pages during the upcoming week before my next blog post?

Hmmmm . . . what if?

 

 

4 Thoughts on “What if . . . ?

  1. Love it. What a great reminder to open your mind and let your imagination wander. Keep asking, Suzanne!

  2. What if… you become a successful Author, and gain worldwide recognition, and win awards and s*%*?? I think that’s shaping up nicely for you, dear Suzanne! 😀

    Lovely post!

    Hedgey xx

If You Want to Write, Ignore this Advice

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Worst Advice Given to New Writers by Suzanne M. Brazil

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What is the most common advice professional writers give to those just starting out? If you want to write, you must read lots of books. Sometimes it’s the only piece of advice given. Usually, there’s no expanding on why or how or what. In interviews on podcasts or in magazines, they repeat it over and over:  If you want to write, you must read. As Nike says, “Just do it.”

I think everyone should read all the time, constantly, every day, whenever they can. But, I find this advice given to new writers to be almost totally useless and enormously frustrating. Over the years, I kept wondering how this metamorphosis was going to happen? Magic? Osmosis? I’ve been reading and writing for most of my life.

I’ve read many classics, hundreds if not thousands of novels, literary criticism, etc. In addition, I’ve been reading books about writers for at least the last 20 years. Natalie Goldberg? Check. Brenda Ueland? Check. William Zinsser? Check. Anne Lamott? Check. Stephen King? Check. You get the idea.

In dedicating my energies and passions to becoming a professional writer comparatively late in life, here is what I’ve learned:

Reading does not teach you to be a writer any more than sitting in a chair teaches you to be a carpenter.

The more chairs you sit in, the more you know what you like, which species of wood visually appeals to you, the curve of the seat or angle of the back you find most comfortable. You may even come to recognize various styles of famous furniture makers and the historical periods in which they worked.

But none of this makes it possible for you to physically build your own chair.

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Despite all the novels I’ve read (famous, critically acclaimed, accessible and obscure), it took completing my own first draft for me to realize I knew nothing about writing a book.

A novel is a specific thing with infinite variations. All of my English and American Lit classes taught me how to find symbolism and recognize a theme but they did not teach me how to build a scene, reveal character, build tension or weave in backstory.

A writer needs tools and the knowledge to use them which is why writing is often compared to craftsmanship.

To build a functional, aesthetically pleasing chair you need to learn how a chair is constructed. You need to know the materials and tools required and you need instruction and practice in using the tools. Is this wood strong enough? Should this be joined with pegs, biscuits or glue? What saw blade works best?

Now, after you’ve got the basics down and haven’t chopped off any fingers, you can loosen up. You can improvise, play with shapes and materials and ask what happens if you try this instead of that.

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I’ve learned it’s the same for writing a book (story, article, essay). You need to take them apart and watch someone putting them together. You need classes in construction, or a manual on story structure. You need to know what parts make up the whole. And not just one class or one practice session.

The truly great writers aren’t purposely leading us astray when they simply tell us to read more. They’re just not expounding on what they mean by “read a lot of books.” And I really wish they would.

You have to read to know your market or genre to know what has become trite or cliché. Most importantly, you have to read to find out what you enjoy, what books you’d love to write. You should also learn to read like a writer at times, looking for how favorite novelists pulled off a certain point of view or climax.

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Reading is a different skill. Reading is a joy. Reading is entertainment. And, yes, reading can teach. Reading will enrich your vocabulary and, as you learn more craft, will expose an endless array of possibilities in your own work.

If you want to write, you must apprentice yourself to the craft of writing. Sitting in a lot of chairs never made anyone a carpenter and reading a lot of books never made anyone a writer.

Click on any of the above authors for some of my favorite books on writing.

12 Thoughts on “If You Want to Write, Ignore this Advice

  1. I fully agree, Suzanne! Like carpentry (of which I have some knowledge – my hubby is one!) the only REAL way to learn and perfect your craft, is simply this: Just DO it! Making many a mistake/losing literary fingers along the way! 😉

    Thanks for a thought inspiring and well argued post!

    Hugs from the little Swiss Hedgehog x

  2. barb armstrong on June 16, 2015 at 3:36 pm said:

    I just will say there is nothing more powerful than the written word!!!!

  3. I was of two minds when I first read it, and am still of two minds, a day later. What’s fun is that you wrote this after I asked my question about recommended books On Writing. Thank you!

    I think you CAN write without reading, but who’s to say if anybody will read it or, having read it, like it? Readings helps a writer determine what they like and don’t like–what styles are attractive, what genre makes their heart beat faster or stops it altogether, what topic or destination they can’t get enough of. Reading keeps a reader striving for perfection; to create something as wonderful or better than their favorite stories.

    Tools help and have their place, and I’m sure 95% of us learn how to make our writing even better when given the proper tools, but I won’t rule out the ability or possibility of a chair builder who comes along and make something wholly beautiful and potentially useful simply by studying other chairs and figuring it all out on his/her own.

    • Well said and I am absolutely sure you are right…there’s always a savant out there making the rest of us feel less special 🙂 My experience has been that I could not, nor would not, want to be a writer if I were not first a lover of books and stories. But all my love did not help me to know that novels were made up of scenes! I still can’t believe that. It’s like discovering water is wet. My post was indeed in response to your question and several recommendations to “read good fiction.” I believe it is crucial to read good fiction if you want to write good fiction. But telling a new writer that without adding the why or the how is like telling a new driver “step on the gas”…OK, and then??? But yes, there’s a 24-year-old (or 90-year-old?) debut novelist out there who did it by feel, by heart and just by reading…oh how I wish that were me! Thanks for the very thoughtful comment and great points! Nothing better than talking books and writing!

  4. Chrstine Kelly on June 19, 2015 at 9:51 pm said:

    Great motivator Suzanne, thank you. And being a visual person I have to tell you that I loved the images you chose. They really spoke to me along with your true and thoughtful words

  5. Love the carpenter metaphor 🙂